now i dunno about you guys, but i've written names in the sand before and it takes quite a while for the waves to come in and wash them away, so just considering that he waited there long enough to do the whole thing twice....that's gotta be true love. she kept saying nothing goes on forever, and eventually she's going to die, but i don't think spencer was trying to make her immortal, just her love and virtues, if that makes sense. anyways, nice sonnet spencer! i liked the image of the beach and the night sky full of stars. :)
