now i dunno about you guys, but i've written names in the sand before and it takes quite a while for the waves to come in and wash them away, so just considering that he waited there long enough to do the whole thing twice....that's gotta be true love. she kept saying nothing goes on forever, and eventually she's going to die, but i don't think spencer was trying to make her immortal, just her love and virtues, if that makes sense. anyways, nice sonnet spencer! i liked the image of the beach and the night sky full of stars. :)

ok, so i agree with everything you said ahahha I have nothing to say :P But, I like what you said about how he wasn't trying to make her immortal, but just their love :)
ReplyDeleteYou'd think that him hearing that she basically has no hope in their "eternal love" he would like ditch her LOL
very true observation about the names in the sand, that guy must be patient :p
ReplyDeleteGreat review! I agree and the guy seems very sweet and truthful man! The ideal image of a guy, I think :)
ReplyDeletethanks kat! you're so right! ideal guy right there, but maybe a little over the top?? :p
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